I keep highlighting pieces to chat about, then deleting them because I find a better one. Phosphorescence? YES PLEASE. Giggling about the verb-ifying, the horrified screeching stop at "age" (that one also elicited a wince), even the opener of "what most people think we do all the time."
We should be able to present a tiny cv: can drive/dock/anchor a 30-ton yacht as recently as last year, earned my Divemaster 5 years ago so can outswim all y'all, but I do have osteoporosis so let me go slow when I want. (That said, I cantered down a beach on a horse last month...) Just to show how "fit" and able we are.
Love the snapshots - and please tell Christopher I'm right there with him in those middle-grade revisions! What I thought would be easy and done is now on month #3! Slow and steady wins the race!
Thank you, and I'll let him know he's in good company. I think anyone writing a mystery gets an automatic pass for extra revision time! You've got this.
I keep highlighting pieces to chat about, then deleting them because I find a better one. Phosphorescence? YES PLEASE. Giggling about the verb-ifying, the horrified screeching stop at "age" (that one also elicited a wince), even the opener of "what most people think we do all the time."
We should be able to present a tiny cv: can drive/dock/anchor a 30-ton yacht as recently as last year, earned my Divemaster 5 years ago so can outswim all y'all, but I do have osteoporosis so let me go slow when I want. (That said, I cantered down a beach on a horse last month...) Just to show how "fit" and able we are.
Love the snapshots - and please tell Christopher I'm right there with him in those middle-grade revisions! What I thought would be easy and done is now on month #3! Slow and steady wins the race!
Thank you, and I'll let him know he's in good company. I think anyone writing a mystery gets an automatic pass for extra revision time! You've got this.